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When chance is upon us
And you have walked beyond my doors
I shall hold on to my tears
Knowing that I once was yours

When chance is upon us
I will hope you find your place
While I sit here with my sorrows
And the memory of your face

When chance is upon us
I shall watch you walk away
With the distances between us
And with so much more to say

When chance is upon us
I will feel your heart take leave
When the mark you left is faded
And you leave me here to grieve
©2005-2009 ~RavenCloud
:iconravencloud:

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This is the poem that I did to go along with one of my "Fool's Fate" pictures that I meant to eventually post by itself... so I'm finally getting around to that.

Anyone who has read the book Fool's Fate will remember the poem that The Fool wrote to FitzChivalry Farseer. Since Fitz never wrote one himself I decided to write one for him. When The Fool wrote his it revolved around the line "In the last dance of chances", so I stuck with the theme of chances and decided on "When chance is upon us".

This is also basically a Shounen-Ai poem

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:iconsilverquill:
Aww, it's so sad... I really loved the whole Fitz/Fool thing, but why did he leave? *sniffle* Poor Fool.

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Chaotic by Nature
"I want to return there... One more time. I want to be as close as I can." -Gren
:iconmisunderstoodpoet:
Sad peice, lovely peice, i simply love it, i will add it in my favorite

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Our love is a bed of nails - Bed of Nails by Alice Cooper
:iconruemilan:
Omigod, I hated that moment. I cried my eyes out. The Fool was muh favorite character!

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「waisetsu y u e ni w.a.i.setsu amai amai uso」
:iconsilverquill:
I know ;_; *sigh* I just wanna hug him and then rip Fitz away from his Molly just to make the Fool happy >_< He should be happy, dammit!

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Chaotic by Nature
"I want to return there... One more time. I want to be as close as I can." -Gren
:iconravencloud:
Thank you very much ^_^

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Who the hell can believe you
I don't ((take)) it anymore

What can I do?
:iconravencloud:
Oh hell yes! Molly should just disappear and be replaced with the Fool

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Who the hell can believe you
I don't ((take)) it anymore

What can I do?
:iconruemilan:
I sense fanfiction! ^^

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「waisetsu y u e ni w.a.i.setsu amai amai uso」
:iconsilverquill:
Hmmm.... One day, Fitz realises his life with Molly isn't all he wants it to be, he remembers his Beloved ( ^^; ) and he starts to get a little worried... What happened to the Fool? So he decides to go find him, he couldn't sleep easily not knowing what's become of his old friend. We can work things from there ^^ Maybe throw in some angst, to bring them closer together... Hmm.... Yes, goodbye Molly, hello Fool ^^

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Chaotic by Nature
"I want to return there... One more time. I want to be as close as I can." -Gren
:iconmisunderstoodpoet:
You are very welcome!

--
Our love is a bed of nails - Bed of Nails by Alice Cooper

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